- Tim Suermondt has earned an Honorable Mention in Streetlight’s 2024 Poetry Contest
It’s Done, Beautifully Again
My wife, Pui Ying, shows me
her latest poem “I hope I did
what I wanted to do here.”
What she did do is stark and lush,
an abandoned castle, and a boulevard
teeming with revelers opening
the reserve of morning, a welcoming—
how difficult it is to merge a heartache
with a gratitude and make it work,
on the page as well as in life.
I tell her I may be stealing some
of her images—the old dynasty boats
disappearing down river on the way
to becoming modern—and I proclaim
her poem a masterpiece and worry
about the poem I’m working on, much
to be executed there, gratitude proving
slippery as a theft I would never try.
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